mabedk / AP2017

All the work done in and for Aesthetic Programming classes at Aarhus University, 2nd semester of Digital Design.
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Feedback on mini_ex3 by Marcus Thomas Due Jensen #3

Open duendue opened 7 years ago

duendue commented 7 years ago

I am a huge fan of both your throbbers. I especially thought the first one with the peeing dog was an entertaining idea. It really captivates the emotional feeling that people usually get when they encounter a throbber. Instead of hiding the annoyance of having to wait, you enhance this feeling by literally making people look at a dog urinating. Anyone who ever had to walk a dog would know that they sure can take their time. For improvement, you might consider to either animate the pee stream or the pee container (That was a sentence I never thought I would have to write). Maybe having the contain empty and then become refiled in an endless loop. I imagine this would keep the users informed that processes are happening continuously.

For your second throbber I really like the aesthetics of the end result. It's quite different from the peeing dog, and is more relaxing in a sense. The colors match well together. The only thing I really thought could be interesting to experiment with, is randomizing the sizes of the flowers. This would give the throbber a refreshing feel, as it would be a new experience every time. Daniel Shiffmans videos about function parameters and arguments covers this in great length (Around video 5.1-5.2 i think). But these are just reflections over different approaches you could have had to your throbbers.