Generic Text Corrections (Part 2)

[Zerrisx]

The old thread was getting a bit messy, so I'm transferring all the still-open issues from it to this one, along with a pile of new ones.

From #6465:

• [X] Scorching Lava: the kicker isn't being required to get the kicker effect

• [x] Life Matrix: it refers to removing a counter from (and regenerating) the wrong permanent

• [x] Aven Trailblazer: type > types

• [x] Dragon Grip: missing ferocious text

• [x] Woebringer Demon: missing "player's"

• [ ] When picking between piles, it would be nice if the chat confirmation was the same punctuation/spacing as the choice - i.e. make these the same: Grammar-wise, that wouldn't work either.

• [x] Some modal cards use capitals in the on-the-stack hover text, while some don't. Looks like it's all the CCC Commands that are in lowercase.

• [x] Retaliation has a bad substitution going on in its granted ability

• [x] Magma Sliver's ability is confused

• [ ] Shredded Sails' text when cast doesn't format the bullets properly JayDi will have to look at this one.

• [x] Hedron Blade: Equipped creature > it

• [x] Necromantic Summons: has two extra "s

• [ ] Sunbringer's Touch: reminder text in the wrong place

• [x] Break Open: Face-down > face-down

• [x] capital offense: Target > target This looks like a mistake on the card itself. It's intentional on the card; the joke being that the entire card is in lower case.

New:

Cards misusing "x for each" and/or not using "equal to"

• [ ] Aerie Ouphes

• [ ] Anathemancer

• [x] Angel of Renewal

• [x] Benediction of Moons

• [ ] Blazing Effigy

• [ ] Cinder Shade

• [x] Dwarven Priest

• [ ] Dying Wish

• [ ] Enter the Infinite

• [ ] Faith Healer - also needs "a" > "an"

• [ ] Flame Elemental

• [ ] Foundry Champion

• [ ] Freyalise Supplicant

• [ ] Ghitu Fire-Eater

• [ ] Gristleback

• [ ] Hateflayer

• [ ] Heartfire Immolator

• [ ] Hellhole Flailer

• [ ] Jagged-Scar Archers

• [ ] Jarad, Golgari Lich Lord

• [ ] Keep Watch

• [ ] Lich Lord of Unx

• [ ] Maga, Traitor to Mortals

• [ ] Massive Raid

• [ ] Morbid Curiosity

• [ ] Paradoxical Outcome

• [ ] Prime Speaker Zegana

• [ ] Respite

• [ ] Sink into Takenuma

• [ ] Skarrgan Skybreaker

• [ ] Steadfast Armasaur

• [ ] Vicious Betrayal

• [ ] Viridian Joiner

Cards that target twice but shouldn't

• [ ] Chorus of Might

• [ ] Mizzium Skin

• [ ] Ray of Command

• [ ] Retreat to Hagra

• [ ] Teleportal

• [ ] Weapon Surge

Other Issues

• [ ] Alpine Houndmaster - "Alpine Houndmaster" > "it"

• [ ] Benthic Explorers - "Untapped tapped" > "Untapped a tapped"

• [ ] Bog Down's text is still wrong - it now says "two a land" instead of "two lands"

• [x] Choking Vines: "that target" > "each of those creatures"

• [ ] Clot Sliver: add "All"

• [x] Collective Restraint - Missing "among lands"

• [ ] Custodi Soulcaller - the return to battlefield part is out of order

• [ ] Discontinuity - "on" > "from" in the reminder text

• [ ] Elspeth, Undaunted Hero - "on up to two target creature." > "on each of up to two target creatures."

• [x] Endless Swarm - cards > card

• [ ] Essence Bottle - a > an

• [ ] Fae of Wishes - "Discard card" > "Discard two cards"

• [ ] Gideon, Champion of Justice - a couple things. a > an, that's still > He's still, Gideon, Champion of Justice > him

• [ ] Greater Krayt Dragon - creature > creatures

• [ ] Grim Tutor - "card and put" > "card, put"

• [x] Hold the Gates - the entire first sentence doesn't belong

• [ ] Iceberg - "a ice" > "an ice"

• [ ] Ice Cauldron - "...if Ice Cauldron has between 0 and 0 charge counters." > "...if there are no charge counters on Ice Cauldron."

• [ ] Indomitable Creativity - card > cards

• [ ] Invigorate - the first sentence is somehow out of order

• [ ] Lowland Oaf - extra period and space

• [ ] Magma Sliver - missing a space

• [ ] Paragon of the Amesha has an extra period and space:

• [ ] Phantasmal Sphere - should adopt the new wording for creating a token

• [ ] Retaliation - missing an end quote

• [ ] Rotwidow Pack - missing an "a", and the period should be a comma

• [ ] Sickening Dreams says as an additional cost twice

• [ ] Sigil of Distinction - missing the em-dash after equip, and the reminder text looks weird without a cost

• [ ] Soul Separator - missing "Exile target creature card from your graveyard."

• [ ] Tamiyo, the Moon Sage - a couple things wrong. "for the rest of the game" should be removed, "from anywhere" should be added, and the weird fragment at the end of the ability should be removed

• [x] Teferi's Curse - should be enchanted permanent instead of creature

• [ ] Teferi's Protection - the text in chat about preventing damage to a play is missing a space

• [ ] Thundermaw Hellkite - "creatures" > "creature"

• [ ] Torment of Hailfire: "they" > "that player", otherwise the grammar on "discards" doesn't work

• [ ] Twilight Prophet: missing a space

• [ ] Vampirism - Draw > draw

• [ ] Venser's Journal - cards > card

• [ ] Voodoo Doll - replace "is instance" with the actual trigger condition

• [ ] Warden of the Woods - "When" > "Whenever"

• [ ] Wildfire - "fourlands" > "four lands"

[ThomasArb]

As mentioned in #6465, some cards are fixed in MR #6602. The MR was merged few hours ago.

[etpalmer63]

I got a few of the easy ones fixed: Endless Swarm Collective Restraint Essence Bottle

I will try to knock a few more out before submitting PR.

Thanks @Zerrisx for finding all these.

Edit: Now working on PR #6707

[arcox]

Fix for Choking Vines under #6724

[jeffwadsworth]

Excellent work finding all of these errors.

[JayDi85]

@xenohedron is it actual list or can be closed? There were many fixes in text generation for paper text equals.

[xenohedron]

Verify test catches all the card text discrepancies, so those aren't needed to be tracked specifically - probably some are fixed and some not yet fixed.

But there are a few items here not covered by verify test, more to do with GUI text display, need to confirm whether still actual:

• Teferi's Protection
• Shredded Sails - confirmed still actual • appears in "choose ability" menu
• picking between piles