magstoffer / StofferBIOL708

Stoffer research compendium for BIOL708
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Feedback on CV #1

Open magstoffer opened 1 year ago

magstoffer commented 1 year ago

Add month to graduation date for MS/advised by Dr. Andrew Chang Expand skills summary and put towards the top

ayoger commented 1 year ago

Hi Maggie! This CV is great- clear, concise, easy to read. You have done some awesome stuff. Here are a few suggestions moving forward:

-add expected graduated date for your grad studies and your advisor -formatting wise, it could be nice to bold or italicize dates to set them apart from the other text- possibly moving them to the right side of the page -for your summer undergrad fellowship, I don't think you need to include dates since this feels like you were progressing through one project and it had different phases; maybe just keep those as bullets; not a huge deal though -teaching experience: could elaborate a little more on bullet points; might be helpful to ask "so what?" at the end of each bullet; ie "collaborated with fellow graduate students to co-teach classes to enhance curriculum and optimize creative hands on laboratory experiences for undergrad students" -could elaborate on field survey bullet for the mill river project- sounds cool! -skills: you could add more specific skills here: any other programs you know well? specific survey skills? (just if you can mention any other program in data analysis or be any more specific on skills that could make this section stronger!)

Nice job!