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Emile's review #11

Open mallory opened 3 months ago

mallory commented 3 months ago

section # of Animals and other ecosystems is missing

section 2.2.2. Water

I don’t have figure but manufacturing consume huge quantities of water too; see Taiwan ref

Section 2.2.1. Land

              I don’t understand the content, its about bio diversity.

              I would have be more graphic (we are children! ): space (even deepspace has there is a work on it starting at the IETF), ground, sea, deep sea …

Section 2.2. Natural resources

                   I would have recalled the nine “planetary boundaries” and the six we already transgressed

I had insist on the relation between the waste that and poisons all the water and the fact that few electronic components are recycled (I heart that only 15% is recycled: to verify).

Mihajlo961x commented 1 month ago

Some additional research to consider is https://gauthierroussilhe.com/en/articles/water-and-microchips-the-climatic-and-industrial-future-of-taiwan