maribel-arac / mywebsite

my first website
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Blocky design #5

Open tzohpilotl opened 7 years ago

tzohpilotl commented 7 years ago

Hi, maribel, good evening. You know what I find really interesting? The fact that you put "My website" and you have a section called "Me, myself and I" but your text is all in third person. Why is that? I admire that you use all the space available in your page because it's not simple to make a design not look empty nor bloated, but I believe, also, that your page is a little bit blocky, because all the sections look very similar and occupy the whole page horizontally. Maybe you should play a little bit more with space to make it look more dynamic. Take care!