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marijnh / Eloquent-JavaScript

The sources for the Eloquent JavaScript book
https://eloquentjavascript.net
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anaphora #508

Closed mikew1 closed 7 months ago

marijnh commented 4 years ago

I don't think that helps—the introduction of the initial "it" seems to add more confusion than the rest of the patch solves. "that tool" referred to the tool, whereas this "it" reads like it refers to the color field.

mikew1 commented 4 years ago

ok - happy to defer. just trying to help. enjoying the chapter. thanks for writing it :)

karbassi commented 4 years ago

@marijnh I think this PR does help clear it up.