This working group would develop a suite of short-term
deliverables aimed at enhancing energy efficiency within
networks.
makes the scope of the WG open-ended. The WG charter is not open-ended but this text gives that impression. I would suggest that this text can be targeted towards the BoF that is -- "The BoF discussion should identify a suite of ..."
This text --
makes the scope of the WG open-ended. The WG charter is not open-ended but this text gives that impression. I would suggest that this text can be targeted towards the BoF that is -- "The BoF discussion should identify a suite of ..."