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Open akshatpradhan opened 9 years ago

akshatpradhan commented 9 years ago

Just my thoughts from my design hat:

There is something about the current logo that makes me feel polarized and radical. I don't know if I should feel positive or negative about it.

However, when I look at these other logos, I feel very American and positively proud of my country. I feel like that is what's missing from the logo.

I feel like something needs to be done to give a more american positive vibe.

jpokeefe commented 9 years ago

Good point. How would you improve it?

On Fri, Oct 3, 2014 at 1:44 PM, Akshat Pradhan notifications@github.com wrote:

Just my thoughts from my design hat:

There is something about the current logo that makes me feel polarized and radical. I don't know if I should feel positive or negative about it.

https://camo.githubusercontent.com/97066026a55ea2033c086391c067daed47fe2915/68747470733a2f2f6d617373706972617465732e6f72672f626c6f672f77702d636f6e74656e742f75706c6f6164732f323031332f30332f5461624c6f676f462d312e706e67

However, when I look at these other logos, I feel very American and positively proud of my country. I feel like that is what's missing from the logo.

https://camo.githubusercontent.com/834acb924086dd1f2cce750b41d168da4719b952/687474703a2f2f7777772e6c7073747566662e636f6d2f73686f702f696d616765732f75706c6f6164732f62732d6c6f676f2e6a7067

https://camo.githubusercontent.com/7f89f708c4237b36153dfd9d8a0e5523f048153a/687474703a2f2f7777772e756e636f7665726564706f6c69746963732e636f6d2f77702d636f6e74656e742f75706c6f6164732f323031322f30342f636f6e737469747574696f6e2e6a7067

https://camo.githubusercontent.com/43ea1a47351e1648b9bb5874a0bf5c2f2e75cef1/687474703a2f2f75706c6f61642e77696b696d656469612e6f72672f77696b6970656469612f656e2f7468756d622f642f64372f477265656e5f50617274795f28556e697465645f537461746573295f6c6f676f2e7376672f3132383070782d477265656e5f50617274795f28556e697465645f537461746573295f6c6f676f2e7376672e706e67

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akshatpradhan commented 9 years ago

Go back to red white and blue, its home and feels natural. There's a site called Criticue where people will provide feedback on your design, might be of help?

Personally, I think its time you hired a branding expert.