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Tools and building blocks for building Systems in Clojure and ClojureScript
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A list of typo, grammar fixes #45

Open aivijay opened 7 years ago

aivijay commented 7 years ago

Am just listing a bunch of typo's or grammar changes that I think might be required below as I am reading the book.

  1. Page 17: (there is a typo messaged should be message as below) Then, whenever an event is fired, a messaged is sent
    ==Then, whenever an event is fired, a message is sent

  2. Page 19: The following reads odd and there is a typo Not that this component needs to be concerned with that in any way, .... ==Not should be Note (TYPO)

Adding some more

Page 22:

which here handles the two message types :cmd/mouse-pos and :mouse/get-hist Should be which here handles the two message types :mouse/pos and :mouse/get-hist

Page 22: [message flow drawing] Missing the above drawing instead just the text as above.


In the following code trailing-mouse-pointer/src/clj/example/core.clj

You create a pid file as example.pid but on shutdown you delete a pid file which is ws-example.pid. Should'nt you be deleting the same file you created to maintain the pid which is example.pid rather?

(pid/save "example.pid") (pid/delete-on-shutdown! "ws-example.pid")