Thanks for all the valuable feedback. I have restructured and rewritten most of it, this time without attempting metaphors (which I rarely use anyway, and even less so from now on). I have fixed mistakes, clarified examples, removed some of them and aimed for a more straightforward text closer to what I wanted to say initially – which you picked up on in the review.
Apologies for being a bit late. I appreciate the effort you put into this, and can only imagine the stress of not having everything in place before December.
Thanks for all the valuable feedback. I have restructured and rewritten most of it, this time without attempting metaphors (which I rarely use anyway, and even less so from now on). I have fixed mistakes, clarified examples, removed some of them and aimed for a more straightforward text closer to what I wanted to say initially – which you picked up on in the review.
Apologies for being a bit late. I appreciate the effort you put into this, and can only imagine the stress of not having everything in place before December.