Closed maxitg closed 4 years ago
@aokellermann, @taliesinb, here is the draft of the talk. Please take a look if you have a chance before 3 PM CDT. Keynote file: http://ipfs.io/ipfs/QmeSDCaUzCGQKtf1bKXHCL48UctVZZ6wL9wLYRUDrf6z1t Video: http://ipfs.io/ipfs/QmXnJQcqwfDSVsa8zWavu4sxb1h1qPa91s54e4V52GpyjV Demo file: SetReplace-Demo-01.nb.zip
The ending needs a bit more work (especially the last slide). I also don't know yet how much time the talk is going to take.
@maxitg I think the presentation (video) is great. Here are a few suggestions:
Module
to the outputs of a rule might be confusing to non-WL people. So maybe in the talk just mention briefly what a Module
does.The video is amazing. Honestly I don't think there is much to improve about it.
On Oct 7, 2020, at 4:46 PM, Antony Kellermann notifications@github.com wrote:
@maxitg https://github.com/maxitg I think the presentation (video) is great. Here are a few suggestions:
I think there's a bit too much jiggling in the animations. Talking about adding a Module to the outputs of a rule might be confusing to non-WL people. So maybe in the talk just mention briefly what a Module does. "Replaces subsets to subsets" is confusing. Perhaps "replaces subsets with newly created subsets"? There is nothing in the presentation about what a hypergraph is. It's not a very common concept, so it might be good to define it. The penultimate slide is "Demo 2", but there is no demo 2. Last slide No link to SetReplace repo No mention of the programming languages used in the project No mention that codebase is open source. People might think that you're looking for new Wolfram employees, since everything else Wolfram does is closed source. — You are receiving this because you were mentioned. Reply to this email directly, view it on GitHub https://github.com/maxitg/SetReplace/issues/426#issuecomment-704986846, or unsubscribe https://github.com/notifications/unsubscribe-auth/AACZEZJJDSAHQECOSEHCI6TSJR5OHANCNFSM4SDX35BA.
Thanks, both of you for the feedback!
I addressed some of the @aokellermann's comments:
Module
at all to explain it.WolframModelPlot
.Here is the final video of the slides: https://youtu.be/i8tNGA1ABbY.
The problem
I'm giving a talk at the Wolfram Technology Conference 2020. The time is Wed 10/7 at 3 PM CDT. The access is private, so not everybody will be able to see it immediately, but the plan is to upload it to the SetReplace's YouTube channel after all (if there are no copyright issues with doing so).
Possible solution
I need to prepare the slides and decide what to talk about. The rough plan is: