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My PhD thesis
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Chapter 1 - Introduction #17

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mbhall88 commented 3 years ago

i.e. Literature review

mbhall88 commented 3 years ago

chapter1-first-draft.pdf

iqbal-lab commented 2 years ago

ok, I am not joking when i say @mbhall88 , unfortunately, you need to email publishers and get permission to reproduce their figures.eg fig 1.1. If you tell them its for a PhD thesis which won't go into general circulation, they will for sure say yes, but you need to do it and show in the thesis that you have done it.

iqbal-lab commented 2 years ago

Great work @mbhall88 chapter1-first-draft-zam-comments.pdf

mbhall88 commented 2 years ago

ok, I am not joking when i say @mbhall88 , unfortunately, you need to email publishers and get permission to reproduce their figures.eg fig 1.1. If you tell them its for a PhD thesis which won't go into general circulation, they will for sure say yes, but you need to do it and show in the thesis that you have done it.

Bugger!! Ok, luckily Springer Nature have an online portal to do this for each article. It's tedious, but won't need to send 100 emails.

mbhall88 commented 2 years ago

@iqbal-lab - Page 2; in response to the sentence "Transduction is mediated by bacteriophages (phages) - viruses which infect bacteria and are the most abundant organism on Earth." You commented

you can only say this if you use the word cellular, otherwise viruses get in the way

What do you mean by this? Bacteriophages are viruses... Not sure what cellular has to do with this statement?

iqbal-lab commented 2 years ago

Bacteria aren't the most abundant organism on the planet. Viruses are. But bacteria ARE the most abundant cellular organisms on the planet

mbhall88 commented 2 years ago

Oh, I was saying that bacteriophages are the most abundant... I thought that seemed pretty clear from the sentence? Obviously not?

iqbal-lab commented 2 years ago

Doh. Yes it makes sense now, sorry. It's fine, my mistake,

mbhall88 commented 2 years ago

chapter1-after-first-comments.pdf

mbhall88 commented 2 years ago

@iqbal-lab in case you haven't looked at this yet, here is a copy after some changes I made from comments from Leah too. All good if you've already started reviewing the previous PDF. thesis.pdf

iqbal-lab commented 2 years ago

i had barely started. no problem, downloading

iqbal-lab commented 2 years ago

all good. a few comments and 1 viva question as i recall. full-thesis-draft-20211018.zam-comments.pdf

iqbal-lab commented 2 years ago

ok to submit IMO. incorporate my stuff or ignore. I think there was one genuine error only, a 10k that shoud be 15