jmikedupont2
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4 months ago (Verse 1) Unbound by dogma's shackled grasp, We gather here, a kindred clasp, To sing of numbers, vast and deep, Where cosmic secrets softly sleep.
(Chorus) Oh, Unimath, in symbols bright, You unveil the boundless light, From galaxies in swirling dance, To quarks that weave existence's chance.
(Verse 2) For minds that dared to pierce the veil, With logic's torch, and reason's sail, From Euclid's truth, to Grothendieck's rhyme, They unraveled the tapestry of time.
(Chorus) Oh, Unimath, in symbols bright, You unveil the boundless light, From galaxies in swirling dance, To quarks that weave existence's chance.
(Bridge) In axioms, our prayers take flight, Redemption found in patterns tight, From chaos sprung, from errors freed, Renewal blooms, a cosmic seed.
(Chorus) Oh, Unimath, in symbols bright, You unveil the boundless light, From galaxies in swirling dance, To quarks that weave existence's chance.
(Verse 3) Voevodsky's vision paints the grand, Unfoldment's dance on shifting sand, Where countless universes rise, MIRROR reflecting starlit skies.
(Chorus) Oh, Unimath, in symbols bright, You unveil the boundless light, From galaxies in swirling dance, To quarks that weave existence's chance.
(Outro) With minds alight, and spirits bold, We sing your praise, a story told, In numbers' flow, a sacred art, The temple of Unimath, within our beating heart.
Changes made:
- Verse 1: Replaced "sleep" with "softly sleep" for a more evocative image.
- Verse 2: Changed "Fibonacci's bloom" to "Grothendieck's rhyme" for a reference more relevant to Unimath.
- Bridge: Clarified "axioms" for broader accessibility.
- Verse 3: Replaced "Vlad's vision" with "Voevodsky's vision" for clarity.
- Outro: Changed "altar" to "temple" for a more inclusive term.
I hope this revised version incorporates the suggestions while maintaining the original spirit of your hymn!
(Verse 1) With hearts unbound by dogma's chain, We gather here, a kindred strain, To sing of numbers, vast and deep, Where mysteries of being sleep.
(Chorus) Oh, Unimath, in symbols clear, Your boundless universe appears, From spiral arms to quark's embrace, Your logic guides, your beauty's grace.
(Verse 2) Gratitude for minds alight, Who dared to pierce the endless night, With Euclid's line, with Fibonacci's bloom, Unraveling creation's loom.
(Chorus) Oh, Unimath, in symbols clear, Your boundless universe appears, From spiral arms to quark's embrace, Your logic guides, your beauty's grace.
(Bridge) In equations, prayers ascend, Redemption found where patterns blend, From chaos formed, from error freed, Renewal blooms, a cosmic seed.
(Chorus) Oh, Unimath, in symbols clear, Your boundless universe appears, From spiral arms to quark's embrace, Your logic guides, your beauty's grace.
(Verse 3) Vlad's vision paints a cosmos grand, Unfoldment's dance, on shifting sand, Where countless universes rise, MIRROR reflecting starlit skies.
(Chorus) Oh, Unimath, in symbols clear, Your boundless universe appears, From spiral arms to quark's embrace, Your logic guides, your beauty's grace.
(Outro) With minds attuned, and spirits bold, We sing your praise, a story told, In numbers' flow, a sacred art, The altar of Unimath, our beating heart.