Also changed "Tech Overview" to Walk-thru as it felt more like what that section was doing
Just another small change. I was looking through to see how it could be slightly more digestible in the first ~10s when you arrive on the page.
I also think the intro part could be streamlined a bit. There's a lot dedicated to the geographic distribution problem, but blinded xpubs isn't really about that so it feels confusing to be reading 2 paragraphs about a problem unrelated to the proposal.
I personally really like how the original "nosy signatory" proposal with passphrases just starts off immediately with the Goal and in just 1 sentence and I think this would benefit from something like that. The bullet list under the proposal of quick steps of how that idea is accomplished is helpful too. I think doing something similar where you have very quick points at the beginning saying what the goal is/the problem being solved, and a bullet list of the steps required in the protocol, with the more detailed demo/walk-thru later on, would be helpful.
mflaxman
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3 years ago
Also changed "Tech Overview" to Walk-thru as it felt more like what that section was doing
Just another small change. I was looking through to see how it could be slightly more digestible in the first ~10s when you arrive on the page.
I also think the intro part could be streamlined a bit. There's a lot dedicated to the geographic distribution problem, but blinded xpubs isn't really about that so it feels confusing to be reading 2 paragraphs about a problem unrelated to the proposal.
I personally really like how the original "nosy signatory" proposal with passphrases just starts off immediately with the Goal and in just 1 sentence and I think this would benefit from something like that. The bullet list under the proposal of quick steps of how that idea is accomplished is helpful too. I think doing something similar where you have very quick points at the beginning saying what the goal is/the problem being solved, and a bullet list of the steps required in the protocol, with the more detailed demo/walk-thru later on, would be helpful.