I think we can fine-tune this description a bit? It also seems like there might be a typo (“These proxy for consumption is joined…”). And missing a period at the end of the last sentence.
My suggestion (which is just a suggestion!) would be something like the following (note that I added that there is no adjustment for loss during cooking, which I think is an important disclaimer):
These data present average daily ‘apparent intake’ of micronutrients, derived from household consumption and expenditure surveys in which food consumption and/or acquisition is recalled at the household-level. These household food consumption data are joined to locally relevant food composition table data. The estimates of apparent intake do not account for intake via fortification nor potential micronutrient losses during cooking.
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I think we can fine-tune this description a bit? It also seems like there might be a typo (“These proxy for consumption is joined…”). And missing a period at the end of the last sentence.
My suggestion (which is just a suggestion!) would be something like the following (note that I added that there is no adjustment for loss during cooking, which I think is an important disclaimer):
These data present average daily ‘apparent intake’ of micronutrients, derived from household consumption and expenditure surveys in which food consumption and/or acquisition is recalled at the household-level. These household food consumption data are joined to locally relevant food composition table data. The estimates of apparent intake do not account for intake via fortification nor potential micronutrient losses during cooking.
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