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Issues in chapter 10 #75

Closed YanjieGao closed 2 years ago

YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

Hi Hui , 请增加类似摘要的一些问题,吸引读者。例如,RL的引出,Recall哪些传统问题,重要性motivation之类的words。Please reference chapter 13

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YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

大小写一致,例如都用小写

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YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

请增加中英文解释概念进术语表

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YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

Add some words和下一章节关联

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YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

如果两章内容都较少,两章可以合并并更新主readme

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YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

cores?

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YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

中文化 image

YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

可以统一检查大小写一致问题,例如都统一 小 写

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YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

请介绍不同派系工作增加性质定义 image

参考:

https://github.com/microsoft/AI-System/blob/main/Textbook/%E7%AC%AC7%E7%AB%A0-%E5%BC%82%E6%9E%84%E8%AE%A1%E7%AE%97%E9%9B%86%E7%BE%A4%E8%B0%83%E5%BA%A6%E4%B8%8E%E8%B5%84%E6%BA%90%E7%AE%A1%E7%90%86%E7%B3%BB%E7%BB%9F/7.4-%E9%9D%A2%E5%90%91%E6%B7%B1%E5%BA%A6%E5%AD%A6%E4%B9%A0%E7%9A%84%E9%9B%86%E7%BE%A4%E7%AE%A1%E7%90%86%E7%B3%BB%E7%BB%9F.md#744-%E6%B7%B1%E5%BA%A6%E5%AD%A6%E4%B9%A0%E8%B4%9F%E8%BD%BD%E4%B8%8E%E5%BC%82%E6%9E%84%E7%A1%AC%E4%BB%B6%E4%B8%8B%E7%9A%84%E8%B0%83%E5%BA%A6%E8%AE%BE%E8%AE%A1

YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

图片调到较为居上,可以防止后面感觉缺文字

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YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

章节内或结尾可以适当增加一些启发性问题,启发读者思考。 image

YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

高亮突出分级标题 image

YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

图表可以用markdown语法标识, 章节风格就容易统一了

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YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

增加章节小节

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YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

改为 markdown语法表,统一格式

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YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

章节介绍或者目录,请参考chapter7.8模板 image

YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

使用 markdown table语法

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YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

请用''' ''' markdown语法呈现代码,方便各章节统一格式

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YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

图名字

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YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

增加小节序号,让其结构性更强

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YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

章节小节 image

YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

Hi Hui,请把lab补充进章节 https://github.com/microsoft/AI-System/tree/main/Labs/AdvancedLabs/Lab9 参考形式参考chapter7,8

YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

https://github.com/microsoft/AI-System/blob/main/Textbook/src/Checker.py Please avoid these errors. We will try to add more in this like "Coding conventions"

YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

image 缺少对称概念

YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

item之间内容描述可遵循同样格式

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YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

https://github.com/microsoft/AI-System/pull/85

YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

https://github.com/microsoft/AI-System/pull/86/

YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

Dear Author, 请同时阅读其他章节内容, 我们需要章节间内容的一些叙事铺垫, 内容呼应和内容去重,当前图书不太适合完全孤立的书写各章,请大家和各章节auther再就这些如果发现的问题单独沟通 。

YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

Dear Author, 请同时阅读其他章节内容, 我们需要章节间内容的一些叙事铺垫, 内容呼应和内容去重,当前图书不太适合完全孤立的书写各章,请大家和各章节作者再就这些如果发现的问题单独沟通 。

尤其第一章会recall各个章节,请大家Double check内容是否需要调整。 参考: https://github.com/microsoft/AI-System/blob/main/Textbook/%E7%AC%AC1%E7%AB%A0-%E4%BA%BA%E5%B7%A5%E6%99%BA%E8%83%BD%E7%B3%BB%E7%BB%9F%E6%A6%82%E8%BF%B0/1.4-%E6%B7%B1%E5%BA%A6%E5%AD%A6%E4%B9%A0%E6%A0%B7%E4%BE%8B%E8%83%8C%E5%90%8E%E7%9A%84%E7%B3%BB%E7%BB%9F%E9%97%AE%E9%A2%98.md

YanjieGao commented 2 years ago

请调整格式哈

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