Overall, this is very much improved both in terms of writing quality and examples. There's still a few minor technical errors, so I'm giving you 40/50 on the technical portion. There's also a few times when you're breaking the style guide, so you get 35/50 on the writing portion. Plus the extra credit gives you 80/100 overall.
Overall, this is very much improved both in terms of writing quality and examples. There's still a few minor technical errors, so I'm giving you 40/50 on the technical portion. There's also a few times when you're breaking the style guide, so you get 35/50 on the writing portion. Plus the extra credit gives you 80/100 overall.