Closed AntonyBishop closed 5 months ago
[ ] get access to the Ministry of Justice's Github groups you've selected, we'll need to verify your email address, aaaaaaa@justice.gov.uk, using Azure Active Directory. This is to verify your identity and begin the process of joining our Github groups.
[ ] Simply click the button below to navigate to a secure Azure AD login page where you may authenticate your identity.
[ ] After you verify your @justice.gov.uk email address, GitHub will send an invitation to qqqqq@justice.gov.uk. Simply accept it, and you're in
[ ] If you need assistance or have any issues, please contact our Operations Engineering team via Slack.
Going to suggest a lot of changes on this page. I'm going to recommend the following based on the research.
The page title ("GitHub Organisation Invitation") doesn't explain what this page is for. Please change to "Verify your work email address" because that is what we are asking users to do.
Replace "To access the Ministry of Justice GitHub organisations you've selected, your email address tony@justice.gov.uk will be verified using Azure Active Directory (AD). This secure step is essential to confirm your identity and initiate the process of joining our GitHub organisations." with "This secure step is essential to confirm your identity and initiate the process of joining our GitHub organisations."
Replace "By clicking the button below, you will be redirected to a secure Azure AD login page for authentication." with "By clicking the button below, you will be redirected to a secure sign-on page where you will be asked to confirm your Office 365 login details."
Replace "After successfully authenticating with your @justice.gov.uk credentials, GitHub will send an invitation to tony@justice.gov.uk. You will need to accept this invitation to join the selected GitHub organisation." with "After successful verification a GitHub invitation will be sent to your work email address. You will need to accept this invitation to join the selected GitHub organisation."
Replace button text "Authenticate tony@justice.go.uk" with "Verify".
I think the last paragraph can stay as it is.
From UR:
Current page:
Value
Reducing and simplifying content will help users understand what will happen next in this part of the journey
Functional Requirements:
Acceptance Criteria:
Notes: