The paper looks great, just one suggestion. You state:
"For example, using functional MRI, we are able to pinpoint where in the brain a certain cognitive process shows higher activation than usual."
"than usual" is a little ambiguous. I'd suggest changing that sentence to something like:
"For example, using functional MRI, we are able to pinpoint where in the brain a cognitive task elicits higher activation relative to a control." (here, the control can mean another condition or non-task timepoints).
The paper looks great, just one suggestion. You state:
"For example, using functional MRI, we are able to pinpoint where in the brain a certain cognitive process shows higher activation than usual."
"than usual" is a little ambiguous. I'd suggest changing that sentence to something like:
"For example, using functional MRI, we are able to pinpoint where in the brain a cognitive task elicits higher activation relative to a control." (here, the control can mean another condition or non-task timepoints).
Happy to discuss further if you don't agree.