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This is the repository for the Avatar team project.
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Comments/Suggestions #5

Open gismondijw opened 3 years ago

gismondijw commented 3 years ago

It was a really good idea to focus on Zuko for the project. The timeline of important episodes was well organized and easy to read. I liked the idea of only including parts in the script for when Zuko is involved. I do like the idea that someone brought up that you all could markup characters or quotes that helped transform Zuko.

am0eba-byte commented 3 years ago

Your project was extremely well thought out and put together! The website is flawless, and I loved the character arc timelines for all three books. I really like how you linked to the full transcript reading view in each plot point, too. Your networks showed very interesting data as well! The only think I could think to suggest for you guys if you decide you want to continue on this project - I think it would be really cool to see a network of the interactions between all of the characters, organized by each of the element types. You could color code it according to each of the types and whatnot. I think that'd be pretty interesting.

Wonderful job!

STF5123 commented 3 years ago

This is one of my all time favorite shows and you did a great job breaking it down in a simple and easy to read manner. I am not sure how I di not think to do something with this show. The timeline by book is well done and lets you see Zuko's progression as a character. I also appreciate the color scheme to match the book. I am a little confused on what the graphs were displaying. IS the top one times Zuko and Ang interacted together on the screen with those characters, or alone with those characters? Some more insight the that would be helpful.

JoshSige commented 3 years ago

Hey guys, first things first I love the topic choice!

My first observation is that the homepage, graphs, and data are really done and displayed quite well. great job on that front. You guys also did a great job in the styling of your website. You managed to use a really monochromatic theme that really just works. It goes along well with the map graphic on the homepage and just looks really great. My absolute favorite part of this project is the changing themes on each page and the timeline structure you guys used! This is a really ingenious idea and plays to the human nature of not wanting to be bothered with large sums of text. The ADHD-friendly snippets of text really work for me. My last comment is that I think the inclusion of a transcript link on each section of the timeline was a great logistics decision. Not having to go to the top of the page to see the transcript and have it easily accessible was a gamechanger for me when navigating through your site.

Great job guys, your presentation was a pleasure. Best of luck in the future!