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[rgov]

Hi @mojodojodev, thanks for this interesting example of writing accelerated computer vision functions in Mojo.

Since you invited suggestions by pull requests, I proofread the article to make some run-on sentences easier to follow. Feel free to use or discard the changes.

[mojodojodev]

Hi thanks @rgov I'll merge this one in and might make another pass, appreciate your help 😀