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Typos and suggested improvements for the MiniBLE English Manual #322

Closed MaplesThroughWindows closed 2 years ago

MaplesThroughWindows commented 2 years ago

All references are for the 25-12-2021 release.

Minor correction:

Page 28, third bullet-point up from the bottom of the page:

The Mooltipass Mini BLE will then the credential

Word missing between 'then' and 'the'.

Minor correction and Suggested Improvement:

Page 16, Paragraph L: The Mooltipass Mini BLE uses a Nickel Metal Hydride Battery (NiMH). For maximum battery longevity, we recommend you we use your device until its battery is depleted.

1) Typo: ...recommend you we use your device...

2) The text is a little ambiguous. I suggest the following instead:

...we recommend you **refrain from charging** your device until...

Suggested Improvement:

The tip to perform NiMH battery reconditioning isn't mentioned until page 16 of the manual and could easily be overlooked by a new user. I suggest adding it, or a reference to it, to the end of the Getting Started section on page 5.