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Interactive computational book on multibody dynamics
https://moorepants.github.io/learn-multibody-dynamics/
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Use personal pronoun consistently #89

Open agryman opened 2 years ago

agryman commented 2 years ago

A minor nit: In the following text from "Introduction", you switch from "I" to "we". 

With the goal of teaching through computation, it means I need to also choose a programming language. There are many programming languages well suited to multibody dynamics computation, but we select [Python](http://www.python.org/) for several reasons:

The book is singly-authored by you, so stick to "I".

If you agree with this choice, I'll go ahead and make this change going forward, along with other minor typos, and submit a PR.

moorepants commented 2 years ago

Yes, that one should be "I". There may be places were I do want it to be we, but I'd have to take a full pass again to see. I'll review a PR with the changes if you make it. I think I may have jumped between I and we a fair amount though :(

agryman commented 2 years ago

Jason,

OK, I'm proofreading from the start. I'll submit several smallish PRs.

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Yes, that one should be "I". There may be places were I do want it to be we, but I'd have to take a full pass again to see. I'll review a PR with the changes if you make it. I think I may have jumped between I and we a fair amount though :(

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agryman commented 2 years ago

I'll fix this in my next PR.