[Testing] [Intermediate Web Lit II] Creating a Storytelling Resource

[chadsansing]

Help test this new storytelling-with-scripts activity!

Lesson plan: http://chadsansing.github.io/curriculum-testing/intermediate-web-lit-two/session07-creating-a-storytelling-resource.html#overview Thimble Project: https://thimbleprojects.org/chadsansing/50675/

Looking for help with copy editing, broken links and images, and other bugs here on GitHub.

Looking for feedback on content, difficulty, and tutorials over on Discourse.

Testing closes on 4/29/16.

Back to issues.

[KGorr]

Lesson Plan: Overview:

• Write the web subhead has no content – it’s like that on all the teaching kits…is that purposeful?
• Materials typo “Internect-connected computers” ☺
• Same weird photo scrolling problem as the other teaching kit

Preparation

• Thimble link not working
• I think the 5th paragraph should link to examples (more on that in discourse).

Defining a Cat Object

• 2 “out loud” should not be hyphenated

• 3 typo “drswing”

• 4 has 2 quotation marks before “hair color”

• very last word typo “broswers” (This is a funny typo that keeps recurring and I laugh every time I say it in my head the way it is spelled. Haha!)

Storytelling with OOP

• 1st sentence typo “browwers” (Seriously, I am cracking up now! I think it’s obvious that I am doing this on a Friday afternoon after a long week. HA!)
• This section also does the weird photo scrolling away thing

Thimble Tutorial:

• Intro – 4th bullet has double “the”

• 1 – 4th paragraph typo “parentehses”

• 2 – missing the “go to preview tab” instructions?

  • 5th 10th & 11th paragraph typo “vairbales”

• 3 2nd paragraph needs closing punctuation

• 5 typo “atrrbiutes” & something is wrong with this phrase “to see how the change you make affect the page”

• 6 2nd paragraph has some weird spacing after the 2nd comma

[chadsansing]

Got it, @KGorr - no fixes on the image or Write the web content for now, though refreshing and waiting to scroll (so all the CSS and JS loads) sometimes helps with the image problem.

[chadsansing]

The curriculum template might get a light overhaul soon to improve readability. In the meantime, please ship me any addition feedback here or via email.