[DESIGN] Contact Us page: Update copy

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[DESIGN] Contact Us page: Update copy #1074

Closed gideonthomas closed 6 years ago

gideonthomas commented 6 years ago

Content ticket: https://github.com/mozilla/mozillafestival.org/issues/1062

All changes happen to /contact

TODOs:

Change title to "GET IN TOUCH"
Remove the text "Sign up here to receive festival news and updates by email."
Add addresses to MozFest House, and MozFest under a "Contact Info" section (copy by Sarah)

sabrinang commented 6 years ago

Design mockup for contact page on redpen here: https://redpen.io/huff6eb11c0ee72b1c

@gideonthomas I couldn't find "Contact Info" copy section by Sarah but I just went on the websites of the location and copy pasted the addresses for the mockup as placeholder for now

gideonthomas commented 6 years ago

Lol sorry, what I said wasn't clear. I just meant that the title "Contact Info" was determined by Sarah.

But this looks great @sabrinang, will update the dev ticket for this.

Saallen commented 6 years ago

@gideonthomas @sabrinang We have now positioned this page as a "Get in contact" so we need to share ways for people to contact us.....email, twitter, location and phone number

The sectio heading Make it better doesnt make any sense to this page

Can you amend this section?

[ ] Remove Make it better-
[ ] Amend title to Email us Please add-
[ ] You can reach us with all enquiries at festival@mozilla.org. During the festival weekend we will have a local emergency number, which will be updated closer to the event.

Please drop further down the page. We welcome suggestions to improve Mozilla festival. It's a collaborative event and your feedback matters. Email us festival@mozilla.org

gideonthomas commented 6 years ago

Hi @sabrinang, I've moved it over to the next heartbeat to accommodate this change. Just to re-iterate and add to what @Saallen mentions above, I added comments in the redpen. Let me know if you have any questions.

sabrinang commented 6 years ago

Here are design mockups for the contact us page:

option 1: https://redpen.io/tr7cd472386695f4a8

dividers with feedback near the footer

option 2: https://redpen.io/gm577a2428d0ee5018

highlighted box for feedback and email/social near the footer

gideonthomas commented 6 years ago

Thanks @sabrinang! @Saallen, which one looks better to you (personally I prefer option 1)?

gideonthomas commented 6 years ago

Thanks @sabrinang and @Saallen!