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murrayds commented 4 years ago

Implemented YY's newest comments to the paper. In addition, I performed a round of proofreading.

@jisungyoon there are a few TODO items that need to be done:

[x] Contact Woo-Sung and ask if we need to add any additional funding information for him or yourself
[x] Add hotel population information on page 4, in paragraph after equation 1
[x] Add hotel information to the bottom of page 15, regarding the number of unique locations left after filtering
[x] Add hotel population information, page 16, paragraph immediately following equation 4
[x] Add hotel information, per YY's comment, top of page 17, in the paragraph immediately following equation 6, regarding the percentage of non-zero flows.
[x] Look over the Author contributions and make sure you agree to, or if you want to change anything
[x] Perform a quick proofreading pass, especially over the methods to make sure everything looks good

jisungyoon commented 4 years ago

No funding information for me and woo-sung for this paper. good to go.

jisungyoon commented 4 years ago

For consistent, I just change south Korean to Korean

jisungyoon commented 4 years ago

Done with my pass! @murrayds

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