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Make it clearer to users that we're asking them to classify their own requests #5999

Open RichardTaylor opened 3 years ago

RichardTaylor commented 3 years ago

On WhatDoTheyKnow.com currently:

Suggestions:

Both the text of the emails, and the design of the site could be improved to make clearer to users what they are being asked to do .

Many of the users may well be people who struggle to use the web, and email. We want to serve those users.

RichardTaylor commented 3 years ago

Having spoken to a couple of users of WhatDoTheyKnow, and in light of recent support mail, it appears there is a problem among some users, who are overwhelmed and/or confused by the emails which result from having used the service.

The "Please update the status of your request" email appears particularly problematic.

Current form:

Subject: Please update the status of your request

To let everyone know, follow this link and then select the appropriate box.

https://www.whatdotheyknow.com/profile/sign_in?r=%2Frequest%2FXXXXXX%23describe_state_form_1

Your request was called [Request Title] .. Letting everyone know whether you got the information will help us keep tabs on [Public Body Name]

-- the WhatDoTheyKnow team


Help WDTK - https://www.whatdotheyknow.com/help/volunteers

Ideas:

RichardTaylor commented 2 years ago

+1

so our system can keep track of deadlines properly and offer advice on what to do next

is far better than the current

help us keep tabs on

Also

Letting everyone know whether you got the information

isn't ideal when often we're asking people to classify auto-response acknowledgments; we need to make it clearer that we understand we're not always asking people to classify a substantive response, but rather just the current status of the correspondence.

WilliamWDTK commented 2 years ago
  • Should the link be the normal link to the request, or a better, less intimidating, link?

I think a less intimidating link would be better. The ideal, for me, would be something like https://www.whatdotheyknow.com/classify/request/URL_NAME, which would then re-direct to sign-in.


Or https://www.whatdotheyknow.com/request/URL_NAME/classify

FOIMonkey commented 2 years ago

I think I've figured out how to fix the email text and the subject line. If we can agree what we'd like it to say, I'll have a go...

I really dislike this email.

FOIMonkey commented 2 years ago

How about: "Letting everyone know what the response was helps us to keep track of deadlines and offer advice on what to do next".

As for the title, I guess one downside of "Have you read the response to your request -{{request_title}}" is that it doesn't mention the ask (classification).

garethrees commented 2 years ago

I think a less intimidating link would be better

At the moment the link needs to be as-is so that users are asked to sign in. I do like the suggestion of a /classify route that handles the sign in check and then redirects to the request with the form open. I think we should focus on the text changes here (easier) and make a new issue for the link (a programmer task).

I guess one downside of "Have you read the response…

I also like that the current version is more of a command. It's clear(er) that we're requesting that the user do something. I could easily imagine seeing "Have you read…" and just deleting/archiving it immediately thinking its some sort of incidental survey, not realising it's a core part of how the site works and helps me as a user.

Letting everyone know what the response was helps us to keep track of deadlines and offer advice on what to do next

Much better body text! I do wonder whether "what the response was" makes sense. I don't have a better suggestion, but maybe "progress" is a term we can use? IDK if people necessarily associate "classify" with what we're actually asking.

Also think we want to improve "To let everyone know, follow this link and then select the appropriate box."

Again don't have a suggestion off hand, but starting off with "To let everyone know" doesn't feel quite right.

FOIMonkey commented 2 years ago

+1 we had a user contact us today because they didn't understand what the email was asking them to do.