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OS101 Module 3 Lesson 1 - Check weird text. #599

Open TomLav opened 10 months ago

TomLav commented 10 months ago

The 2nd sentence in this line is hard to understand and should probably be reworded.

FAIR principles help researchers make better use of, and engage with a broader audience with, their scientific data than outdated techniques would allow.

Possibly:

FAIR principles help researchers make better use of their scientific data, and engage with a broader audience, than outdated techniques would allow.

bressler95tops commented 10 months ago

Thanks @TomLav I agree with this revision of this text and will see what some of our people at the project office think.

bressler95tops commented 10 months ago

Changed title to Lesson 1 after checking the referenced line

katblanchette commented 5 months ago

@bressler95tops - Please correct.

bressler95tops commented 5 months ago

Thank you @katblanchette I have addressed the issue in M3L1. For your reference (and for the MOOC developers) you may look at PR #749 to see the exact change. The exact text change is under the files changed tab of the referenced Pull Request. Let me know when you are able to get that updated on the MOOC.

katblanchette commented 5 months ago

Thank you @bressler95tops. The OS101 Team has also updated the sentence in the Instructor Lead Training deck and submitted the update to the MOOC. We will notify you when the MOOC update is complete.