Feedback Fede 22/01/21 - Githubissues

General:

[x] Check Fede thesis
[x] Build bridges between chapters
[x] More small titles (cut titles sections)
[x] Change prelude (remove)
[x] Small introductions for the chapter
[x] OSMNX, the same library we used in the previous chapter.. Same with data quality. (reference) Elaborate in the first chapter, and then reference.
[x] Make sure to have data chapter everywhere

[x] Key points
[x] Go to the contribution, in this thesis we investigate.... In the first part, we review.--- in the first ch we give an original contribution... then we focus on a specific layer, first bike layer, then pedestrian layer... Conclude
[x] Give the ideas, why I wanted to work on this. (Take introduction from the review)
[x] Talk about my experience, following my routes, I started in this direction, then I encounter this field of complex systems (cities as complex systems) Something like: "Architects and urban planners has been working with cities (discuss), transport systems, sustainable cities, etc."

[x] In this first chapter, we review... (look at beginning chapters fede) the literature in multimodal transport and mobility by following the approaches on the complex systems..
[x] Sentences of beginning change to chapter review. "In this chapter, we provide a comprehensive overview of complex systems approaches to multimodal transportation and mobility in urban networks."
[x] When talking about overlap, say: "a possible approach on this is the overlap census, that we cover in detail in chapter 2..." go on

[x] Remove the part about the vector of adjacency matrix... change for: "this was already discussed in the review..."
[x] For introduction. "In the previous chapter, we survey the literature on the topic of.. in this chapter, we provide an original contribution to the topic by suggesting a method to extract..."
[x] Methods and data, change the name. Data can be ok. Rather than methods change the title
[x] 3.4 should not be results, change to: "Identifying clusters of cities with the Overlap Census"
[x] Instead of methods use: "A local measure of multimodal integration"
[x] Instead of results, change to: "clustering cities with the overlap census"

[x] Intro: "In the first two chapters we investigated the interconnected network of trans systems. Here to make urban transport sustainable, we shift our attention to the bicycle layer. In particular, to the bicycle infrastructure, for which it is still not clear how to extend them comprehensively..."
[x] Algorithms deserve more attention.
[x] Split the algorithms and the evaluation

[x] For introduction: "Here we focus on the pedestrian..."
[x] Building the LQI
[x] Practical flavor. Even if there are potentially other ways to do it, this is a synthetic use of doing it and can be used for policymakers. In particular, it has been used in Budapest...