Closed hadinon closed 8 years ago
Here's my attempt to reduce text to bullet points:
Structure tab
Climate Data tab
[[note: I would link the word MACA to their website: http://maca.northwestknowledge.net/ and maybe add "2 future emission scenarios" as a bullet on the image? Add another bullet point that says, "time period (out to 2099)". Also, statistically speaking it would be more appropriate to replace all DSS instances of (on this page and in tooltips, legends, etc.) the word "range" with "spread" (see example in third bullet above).]]
Three-Map Layout tab
Time Series tab
I have updated the wording on the overview page and bolded some important words/phrases.
The Time Series tab seems a bit short on information, so maybe we can add a bit more detail. Let's re-visit this once we get the faded bars design in place.
I have updated the time series image on the DSS Introduction landing page to show the faded bars. Of course, once we get help from the SREF graphic designer, this will be replaced.
Can you think of any additional text to add for the Time Series tab?
Looks good. As far as additional text for the time series tab, what about adding a bullet saying that the time period and RCP represented by the map(s) above will be highlighted in bold and dark green with a marker indicating the RCP. Thoughts?
Good idea. I added a bullet about that and another about hovering over the bars to see more information. I will close this issue for now, but we can always come back later if we have other ideas for the wording.
Yep, that sounds good. Closing this issue!
Per suggestions from Ryan and Katherine Hegewisch, tweak the wording on the Climate Data tab:
Updated wording is in place on this tab. Please review this and offer suggestions if you have any.
Slight tweaks suggested below:
If you agree, I will send Katherine the new text to make sure she's OK with our edits.
I have added this tweaked wording. One thing I don't like is that this tab is very wordy now, and it actually requires vertical scrolling to see everything. This gets away from our goal of short bullet points to emphasize the main ideas. I wonder if the current information might be better on the MACA FAQ page, which we could link at the bottom of the text? And if we could reduce the tab contents to just the basic information about the climate data.
Yeah, I agree. I'm thinking the material would be reduced to:
We can probably even remove "which connects large-scale output from global climate models to local scales at a sufficient resolution for decision making" if we wanted to shorten it more. Thoughts?
I'll get to work on that MACA FAQ for DSS. :smile:
OK that shortened wording is now in place. I do like at least mentioning global climate models on this page since otherwise it doesn't really give any indication of what MACA is or where the data comes from. I still think it's worthwhile to have a more detailed explanation on the FAQ page, too.
Suggestion from Ryan: Add a graph on the Climate Data tab to explain the RCPs. Here's one from USGS that we could possibly use:
http://pubs.usgs.gov/fs/2015/3042/images/fs2015-3042_fig02.png
Looks great to me!
I have added this image to the Climate Data tab. I also moved the "Future time period" bullet point to beneath the "Future projections..." section so it wasn't all alone beneath the image.
Looks good! One thing that I thought of the other day... we may need to adjust the text on the Three-Map Layout tab now that the Historical Observed also has three maps. Maybe we could have two headings: "Historical Data" and "Future Projections" with two bullets under each: 1) center map and 2) side maps. Then, put the "Map Features" as a heading below that with four bullets (Single-click to select a location, double-click to zoom, click and drag to pan, click map titles to enlarge) or just one bullet with all four, depending on space. Thoughts?
Yes, I like this idea. That tab has always been a bit thin on content. I have updated it with your suggestions, although I didn't put the map features as separate bullets since it would've forced the text in that box to scroll, and I try to avoid that if possible.
Let me know if any wording changes are needed.
Yep, looks great. Super minor tweak: can we change the word "range" to "spread" under "Historical Data - Side maps"? Other than that, I think we can re-close this issue.
Done.
On each tab, reduce text using bullet points and bold when applicable Add this to the Three-Map Layout tab: “click the map to select your location” *Add this to Climate Data tab: "time period (til 2099)" (HIGH PRIORITY)