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TP review of draft-10 part 2 #58

Closed abierman closed 8 years ago

abierman commented 8 years ago

Some minor comments on s.4

s4.5 /MUST not/MUST NOT/

s.1.1.3 ' ordered-by user ' s.4.4.1 ' "ordered-by" user' s.4.8 ' user-ordered ' s.4.8.4 ' user-ordered ' ' ordered by the user. ' s4.8.5 ' user ordered ' ' ordered by the user. '

I think these are all the same in which case I would prefer a single term; the defined one is probably best

s 4.4 ' If the server implements any YANG module that contains a configuration data node that is "ordered-by" user, then the "insert" and "point" query parameters MUST be supported. If not, then these parameters not applicable. '

seems at odds with s.4.8.4

' The "insert" query parameter MUST be supported by the server. '

likewise for "point" in s.4.8.5

Tom Petch

abierman commented 8 years ago

issues addressed in restconf-12