Lauren's recommendation throughout her comments, which I agree with.
Introductory paragraphs at the beginning of Sections should just summarize what we will talk about in that section, so that the reader knows what to expect and knows whether to skip it if they are just skimming for information.
Lauren's recommendation throughout her comments, which I agree with. Introductory paragraphs at the beginning of Sections should just summarize what we will talk about in that section, so that the reader knows what to expect and knows whether to skip it if they are just skimming for information.