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Q4 Observation section #3

Open ccaitlin opened 1 year ago

ccaitlin commented 1 year ago

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Caitlin C

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Observation section question 4

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what is the budget would you expect by chance if the poem was constructed by randomly using the possible words?

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what is the budget that you would expect if by chance the poem was constructed by randomly using the possible words?

neurologic commented 1 year ago

Thanks for the suggested edit. "if by chance the poem was constructed" seems wonky still -- maybe not needed at all?

Proposed Edit What is the budget that you would expect if the poem was constructed by randomly selecting from among the possible words instead of being selected to convey meaning?