[x] Is the title GP Connect Messaging - Design Principles used to distinguish from GP Connect API design principles? I'd suggest GP Connect Messaging could be removed
[x] Design Principles: "....updates to GP systems are facilitated" suggest use GP Principal Clinical Systems (also in other part so this page and throughout spec. could use PCS suppliers for short - confer with Mike H on this nomenclature) ...."GP core clinical system" referenced later
Asynchronous messaging paradigms: "Messages flowing into GP practices on MESH" suggest "Messages flowing into GP PCSs on MESH"
[x] 1. Point to point event notification: full stop missing after last para
[x] 2. Publish/Subscribe event notification: "...will subscribe at an event hub..." suggest "...will subscribe through an event hub ..."
[x] Messaging format : FHIR STU3 Messages: might be worth adding a line on why this was chosen, as you have for other decisions
[x] Reliability: ITK3: full stop used after the first bullet point when probably should be at the end of the second one
[x] Re-usability: Payload re-use: "...a particular use case, care has been ..." suggest comma isn't needed
"....fulfil other identified uses cases..." suggest "use cases"
[x] Is the title GP Connect Messaging - Design Principles used to distinguish from GP Connect API design principles? I'd suggest GP Connect Messaging could be removed
[x] Design Principles: "....updates to GP systems are facilitated" suggest use GP Principal Clinical Systems (also in other part so this page and throughout spec. could use PCS suppliers for short - confer with Mike H on this nomenclature) ...."GP core clinical system" referenced later Asynchronous messaging paradigms: "Messages flowing into GP practices on MESH" suggest "Messages flowing into GP PCSs on MESH"
[x] 1. Point to point event notification: full stop missing after last para
[x] 2. Publish/Subscribe event notification: "...will subscribe at an event hub..." suggest "...will subscribe through an event hub ..."
[x] Messaging format : FHIR STU3 Messages: might be worth adding a line on why this was chosen, as you have for other decisions
[x] Reliability: ITK3: full stop used after the first bullet point when probably should be at the end of the second one
[x] Re-usability: Payload re-use: "...a particular use case, care has been ..." suggest comma isn't needed "....fulfil other identified uses cases..." suggest "use cases"