nickrusso42518 / cisco-etech

Free Cisco CCIE/CCDE Evolving Technologies book
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Minor corrections on some English #33

Closed JulioPDX closed 3 years ago

JulioPDX commented 3 years ago

1.6.2, The image that follow is from from www.docker.com that compares VMs to containers at a high level. Remove secondary from

Pg. 128, Loopback 42518 has a description defined by no IP addresses by should be changed to but

Pg. 146, The follow products should be changed to the following products

Pg. 147, Below is a list of supported platforms that support being managed by Chef: Something about this just doesn’t sound right, I could be crazy :)

Pg. 151, so I wont explain every detail The book references author in many portions of the writing. This sentence seemed to stand out as the perspective changes in the sentence.

Pg. 161, The elements of these lists are Result objects which contain extra interesting data that is be accessible from a given task Consider changing to “data that is accessible from a given task”.

Pg. 181, This demonstration focuses primary on Batfish Change primary to primarily