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BusDbAdapter code review requested 2nd #20

Closed GoogleCodeExporter closed 9 years ago

GoogleCodeExporter commented 9 years ago

Update BusDbAdapter.java to the head version. 
I added new comments and fixes as suggested by the first review.
See if there's any other change that needs to make

Original issue reported on code.google.com by QUANGHUY...@gmail.com on 19 Feb 2010 at 5:07

GoogleCodeExporter commented 9 years ago
CODE REVIEW - Bus Stop Alarm
Date: Feb 19, 2010
File: BusDbAdapter.java
Revision: 109
Author: Huy Dang
Reviewer: Derek Cheng

Summary:

Second review of BusDbAdapter.java. Suggestions from first review has been 
incorporated into code. Added methods for interacting with the database. This 
review 
will examine the changes made for the most part, and will focus on code 
formatting, 
adherence to Java / Android style guidelines, and adherence to object-oriented 
principles. 

Comments:

CODING STANDARDS

FileInputStream is never used in the code - remember to remove it if it won't 
be used 
in the future. 
In the database query statements, have one space between the name of the 
statement 
and the = sign. 
When initializing String arrays (or any other types of arrays), you can use the 
shorthand notation without the "new String[]", e.g. you can write String[] args 
= 
{route_id, route_desc, .......}; in line 225, and other places.
In line 207, fix the spacing between the ")" and "{" in the declaration of 
createDest(). There are other methods that have the same problem so make sure 
to 
check that.
In line 212-213, when you only have 1 line in an if block, please put braces 
around 
that single statement anyway, in order to adhere to Android guidelines.
There are some spacing issues in deleteDest() in the "catch" line, "finally" 
line, 
and "return" lines.
There is a minor spacing problem in line 367.
Minor spacing issues in line 561-565.

COMMENTS

Comment at top with author information so others would know who wrote this 
file. Move 
the file description comment before the import statements.
When documenting methods, use third person perspective consistently. ("opens" 
vs. 
"open") 
There are two types in the comment in line 230. 

LOGIC

In readDbFile() you have a while-true loop that breaks when the resource has 
been 
read through  the end. Instead of using while-true, you can write "while 
((line=bin.readLine()) != null) { ... }" as that would be much nicer and 
potentially 
not get stuck in an infinite loop for whatever reason.

ERROR HANDLING

deleteDest() - I assume that you are going to put in logging inside the catch 
block, 
so this is just to remind you that it should be implemented, preferably as soon 
as 
possible since it is generally a bad idea to leave catch an exception without 
doing 
anything. It might also be good to notify the user that the transaction was 
unsuccessful.

CODE DECISION

In line 469-470 in getDestColumn(), mCursor is set to null, then immediately 
set to 
something else in the next line. The initial setting to null is redundant 
unless it 
is for detecting some sort of error (in which case, the statements should be in 
a 
try-catch block?) (also in getListDest())

As you mentioned in readDbFile(), getDestTbSize() is a helper method. Would it 
be 
better if we made that method private instead of public?

Original comment by chen...@gmail.com on 21 Feb 2010 at 7:21

GoogleCodeExporter commented 9 years ago
One more issue: there is a DatabaseHelper as a nested class in 
BusDbAdapter.java, but
an almost identical version also exists as a separate .java file. This creates
redundancy, and we need to get rid of one or the other. 

Original comment by chen...@gmail.com on 22 Feb 2010 at 7:10

GoogleCodeExporter commented 9 years ago

Original comment by chen...@gmail.com on 23 Feb 2010 at 7:26

GoogleCodeExporter commented 9 years ago

Original comment by chen...@gmail.com on 23 Feb 2010 at 7:27

GoogleCodeExporter commented 9 years ago
Issue updated:
What steps will reproduce the problem?
1. Check out the newest version from svn
2. Do review in file BusDbAdapter

Expected:
The completed version of BusDbAdapter.java that should work properly and in 
good 
coding  style after first code review

Actual:
There're still a few minor errors in coding style needs to be pointed out in 
requested code review

Original comment by QUANGHUY...@gmail.com on 14 Mar 2010 at 4:50