Open Dewi-Amaliah opened 3 years ago
Section 2 The NLSY79 might be better with two subsections
2.1 Database
where this section gives a brief overview of the wages data as used in singer and willet, that we are aiming to refresh
Hide some of the code. For example in 3.1.1, show the block on tidying the birth data, and gender/race but outline only the tidying of grade. The reader can be pointed to the supplementary code.
Similarly in 3.1.2, maybe just the first block, and bullet point the steps for the other blocks of code.
There are a couple of ?? in the paper which means the references/figures didn't get calculated properly. (eg in 3.2.1)
Fig 2, probably only needs 5 individuals shown, as example - with the caption pointing to the total number of subjects identified to have this type of pattern.
Section 3.2.1 could flow better, in terms of plot chosen and sequence of plots shown, to demonstrate the handling of extremes.
And maybe a little less code - outlined in the text, and referred to be in supplementary.
Hi Prof.Di,
I have made revisions based on your comments. However, for the flow of section 3.2.1, I am not quite sure, since I only changed the sequence of the two plots corresponding to the extreme values. Or should I compare more weights in a plot?
Best regards, Dewi