Closed mrmeszaros closed 2 years ago
I think the teeth could very well cast a shadow onto the gullet paths. Contrast between the gullet paths could be a tad more intense in order to increase the abyss effect. The outer teeth could get some "gum bulges" around them like in the original icon.
Will a standard symbol shadow for the red circle make it look like a protruding bulge as seen in the original icon?
Maybe there's a good looking way to position some of those "plague spots" around the red circle. Symbol will have to be shrinked in order to do that.
Looking at the website background maybe it's easier to do a circular arrangement of "densely packed teeth" on the same level? Probably easier than getting the 3D effect right.
That's a good shout!
@palob Good idea! I will look into it during the holidays!
Hey, I finally had the time have a go at it. This is what I came up with. I have a few ideas how to create alternatives (like swapping small / big teeth), might create them soon.
That's a good direction. Maybe a bit simpler shaped teeths and a lower number.
I'll remove the small teeth, that's too much, I agree. Could You elaborate on the simpler shape?
I thought of tucking the outer teeth under the "gum", to make it less busy / simplify the shapes - like this:
Or tuck the inner teeth too?
:+1: This is way more recognisable as a gullet.
I'm slightly leaning towards variant 1. It is a bit more busy but looks more like a busy whereas variant 2 has a machine/steampunk touch to it. Is there a way to get a shadow for the gum or gum+outer row of teeth? How does this look with brighter colours?
The shadows help I think (I liked version 1 better with the shadows). Also, thickening the outer gum helped I think.
Not sure about the colors - the baseplate and the outer gum looks pretty bright to me. Here is a brighter purple / grey / inner teeth for in inside. That might also accentuate the drop shadow too.
The right one looks ace. Maybe slightly less saturation for the purple.
Good catch with the grid alignment! Done.
About the colors - I picked them from the original icon: | Original | Tweaked | Role |
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#79132e |
as-is | Base | |
#f10b37 |
#c20a2d (darker) |
Outer Gum | |
#4d1330 |
#58223e (desat. + lighter) |
Inner Gum | |
#000000 |
#262626 (lighter) |
Throat |
I feel they work pretty well. However, You are right, the overall brightness is low. Here two brighter versions: | Current | B | C |
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Both B and C have lighter inner parts, but the inner gum's hue in C was pulled +5°, so it feels closer to the original reddish Mulberry Wood.
I'd go for C but if You feel it should be even brighter, I'll do some more tweaking - maybe lighten the base? (though that might decrease the contrast between it and the gum)
C it shall be :-)
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A game about being a monster.
Initial version, shadows are missing, @palob could you help with ideas?