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#Copy: Suggested Copy Improvisations for landing page #93

Closed shaloo closed 4 years ago

shaloo commented 4 years ago

@rgommers, @joelachance - Please review and let me know if this copy is better than what currently exists on the landing page. This is a mock up in powerpoint - needs to be translated into html/md - Hugo way - if okayed. Hence this ticket. Not sure if someone is already working on it, if not, I can process this.

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rgommers commented 4 years ago

I think the textual tweak (start with "fast" under "Powerful N-dim ...", and the text under "Interoperable") are improvements. I don't think I'm a fan of the gray highlights, since the 1-2 sentences aren't really in need of a summary and it may even be misleading (e.g. the essence of open source isn't "free to use").

So perhaps you can open a PR for just the textual changes?

shaloo commented 4 years ago

Alright, sounds good.

shaloo commented 4 years ago

PR https://github.com/numpy/numpy.org/pull/105 submitted with suggested changes.