Note from the teaching team: This bug was reported during the Part II (Evaluating Documents) stage of the PE. You may reject this bug if it is not related to the quality of documentation.
I would say "new user" is not clear enough for the "As a" section. What kind of new user? Also many actions here can be done by non-new users as well, so the scope from "new user" is incorrect.
Also there are a lot of "I can" in the "So that I could" section that can (and should) be removed.
Note from the teaching team: This bug was reported during the Part II (Evaluating Documents) stage of the PE. You may reject this bug if it is not related to the quality of documentation.
I would say "new user" is not clear enough for the "As a" section. What kind of new user? Also many actions here can be done by non-new users as well, so the scope from "new user" is incorrect.
Also there are a lot of "I can" in the "So that I could" section that can (and should) be removed.
[original: nus-cs2113-AY2223S2/pe-interim#2330] [original labels: severity.Low type.DocumentationBug]