Under the Create a Personalized Plan section we have as follows:
"With EPIC, you can create an educational of occupational plan specific to your desires."
Not sure if you want to say "...create an educational AND/OR occupational plan..." So using "and" or using "or" instead of "of".
In the How EPIC Works section under the Explore subsection we have as follows:
"Explore information about schools, occupations, and majors to help your options."
My only thought here is that the "...to help your options." is a little difficult to follow as a new user. I would ask myself, "what options?" "What do they mean by that?" So, I think here it might follow the saying of "where there is less, there is more". Meaning that if we just ended the sentence at "majors" and deleted the "to help your options."
Just a thought I had^^
Under the Build subcategory we have as follows:
"Fill out preferences in 5 categories to find the best opportunity for you education." YOU needs to be "your".
Under the Compare subcategory we have as follows:
"Save your favorite options that you build and compare the sccenarios." SCCENARIOS needs to be "scenarios". I would also suggest using the same wording in the Build subcategory--"preferences" instead of "options" in this sentence.
Only other thoughts I have about the landing page is that we have yet to get anything on those tabs. So I might think it best to take them off until we can get them up and running. Also might suggest filling the "About us" tab up a little bit more.
Under the Create a Personalized Plan section we have as follows: "With EPIC, you can create an educational of occupational plan specific to your desires."
Not sure if you want to say "...create an educational AND/OR occupational plan..." So using "and" or using "or" instead of "of".
In the How EPIC Works section under the Explore subsection we have as follows: "Explore information about schools, occupations, and majors to help your options."
My only thought here is that the "...to help your options." is a little difficult to follow as a new user. I would ask myself, "what options?" "What do they mean by that?" So, I think here it might follow the saying of "where there is less, there is more". Meaning that if we just ended the sentence at "majors" and deleted the "to help your options." Just a thought I had^^
Under the Build subcategory we have as follows: "Fill out preferences in 5 categories to find the best opportunity for you education." YOU needs to be "your".
Under the Compare subcategory we have as follows: "Save your favorite options that you build and compare the sccenarios." SCCENARIOS needs to be "scenarios". I would also suggest using the same wording in the Build subcategory--"preferences" instead of "options" in this sentence.
Only other thoughts I have about the landing page is that we have yet to get anything on those tabs. So I might think it best to take them off until we can get them up and running. Also might suggest filling the "About us" tab up a little bit more.