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ed: sentence clarification #257

Open Sakurann opened 1 month ago

Sakurann commented 1 month ago

I don't understand this sentence that points to the claims that are REQUIRED: If present, the following registered JWT claims MUST be included in the SD-JWT and MUST NOT be included in the Disclosures, i.e. cannot be selectively disclosed: the sentence also uses two normative statements in one. Could it be clarified/simplified as something like: The following registered JWT claims MUST NOT be included in the Disclosures, i.e. cannot be selectively disclosed: Thanks.

danielfett commented 1 month ago

Discussed on the editors' call. Yes, the first part of the sentence is not great. What you propose makes sense, we may want to add that the context is "during issuance".