whitequark
commented
7 years ago Sorry but this is not an improvement. You have mangled semantics in a few places, e.g. in all cases where you have removed "often".
You've improved the wording elsewhere but the benefit is marginal and I don't want to waste my time on this. Please stick to a topic you understand much better than cross-compilation of OCaml packages.
Hey, I am taking a technical writing course. This is part of our project to edit some documentation. Please accept my requests. Thanks