Here are my suggested edits to the text on this page:
Change '( alongside WCIT 2017 )' to '(includes entry to WCIT 2017)'
Change 'Ticket is required to enter the TICTeC@Taipei.' to 'Tickets are required to enter TICTeC@Taipei
Change 'Tickets Included' to 'Tickets include:'
Change 'Single room with breakfest of 4 stars hotel for 4 nights during Sep.10th-14th (excpet regurlar ticket without accommodation)' to: 'Single room with breakfast at 4-star hotel for 4 nights from 10th-14th September (except regular tickets without accommodation)'
Change 'Free to enter TICTec@Taipei & WCIT 2017 and Social events (RSVP)' to: 'Free entrance to TICTec@Taipei & WCIT 2017, plus social events (RSVP needed)
Change 'TICTeC@Taipei will use the same "Badge" and "Venue" with WCIT 2017.' to: 'TICTeC@Taipei will use the same "Badge" and "Venue" as WCIT 2017.'
Change 'The "Badge" can be acquired in the WCIT registration desk.' to: 'The "Badge" can be acquired at the WCIT registration desk.'
Here are my suggested edits to the text on this page:
Change '( alongside WCIT 2017 )' to '(includes entry to WCIT 2017)'
Change 'Ticket is required to enter the TICTeC@Taipei.' to 'Tickets are required to enter TICTeC@Taipei
Change 'Tickets Included' to 'Tickets include:'
Change 'Single room with breakfest of 4 stars hotel for 4 nights during Sep.10th-14th (excpet regurlar ticket without accommodation)' to: 'Single room with breakfast at 4-star hotel for 4 nights from 10th-14th September (except regular tickets without accommodation)'
Change 'Free to enter TICTec@Taipei & WCIT 2017 and Social events (RSVP)' to: 'Free entrance to TICTec@Taipei & WCIT 2017, plus social events (RSVP needed)
Change 'TICTeC@Taipei will use the same "Badge" and "Venue" with WCIT 2017.' to: 'TICTeC@Taipei will use the same "Badge" and "Venue" as WCIT 2017.'
Change 'The "Badge" can be acquired in the WCIT registration desk.' to: 'The "Badge" can be acquired at the WCIT registration desk.'