Open vv-monsalve opened 1 month ago
o
and s
: Octavio opts to keep the old version. I suggest to make slight adjustments to the New/Old c
and e
are reviewed (above comment), o and s needs to be consistent with them
f
, g
, c
: Octavio wants to keep the new. Agreedt
main stem is now more centered and shorterm
is narrowed now and arches less flatdiscotheques
, particularly th
and ma
ox
s
: Octavio wants to keep the old. I would keep the new but review after the changes performed in c
(above commenta.ss01
: Octavio opts to keep the old. Suggested slight adjustments of the New/Old. Aperture in new is better, but the glyph is probably getting too wide.g.ss01
: Octavio wants to keep the old. I would keep the new, but check after modifying a
a.ss01
and g.ss01
: Octavio opts to keep the new. Suggestion to review the a
width; looks a bit wide.
Hi @octaviopardo, Based on the PDF review of the most crucial glyph changes, I've created some comparison GIFs in which the before and after were superimposed to perceive better and evaluate the changes.
PDF source: letras en contexto.pdf
While doing this exercise, some other glyph changes become evident, so it's good to review them all at once in context.
c, e, f
f
keeping the new designc
ande
: Octavio opts to make slight adjustments to the New/Old c, e in lighter weights but keeping the new in the black (agree)n
,m
,h
: Please check the joins, look smoother in the oldg
relieved lower opening looks bettery
counter relievedz
color distribution improvedk
strokes weight distribution improved