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Open Hardware Makers Curriculum
https://curriculum.openhardware.space/
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Review of module 1: Welcome to OHM #29

Closed thessaly closed 2 years ago

thessaly commented 2 years ago

Do you agree with the content?

Yes

Do you agree with the opinions/statements

Yes

Any content to add/remove?

1.1 "Working open"

1.2 "The Open Hardware Landscape"

1.3 "Open Hardware Pathways"

1.4 "Open Hardware Canvas"

Any more resources?

For 1.1

We don't have any and no resource comes to my mind right now

For 1.2

For 1.3

Maybe we can add good examples of commercial, educational, activist, scientific, artistic open hardware?

For 1.4

Are the assignments appropriate

For 1.1

Yes, I think is good to start with a light exercise as an introduction

For 1.2

Yes, but the list of projects from the consultation is missing

For 1.3

Yes, still simple but thought-provoking questions

For 1.4

Yes, make the link clickable

Typos

For 1.1

In "What does working open mean?"

vektorious commented 2 years ago

NOTE: All changes were done in pull request #39

Do you agree with the content?

Yes

Do you agree with the opinions/statements

Yes

Any content to add/remove?

1.1 "Working open"

"What does working open mean?" last sentence, when it says "an open process", I'd link it to the blog post of the curriculum review

1.2 "The Open Hardware Landscape"

I'd change the subtitle to "An introduction to open hardware communities"

  • agree and done I'd add a link to the CERN OHL in the last paragraph of "definitions and licenses"
  • agree and done I'd add links to Arduino, RepRap and Prusa when mentioned Same for GOSH, Hackteria, Appropedia, OpenCores.
  • agree and done I'd add riscV to that 2nd paragraph in "communities & platforms".
  • well, doesn't hurt. But can you do it @thessaly Link to all platforms Hackaday, Instructables, Hackster, KitSpace
  • agree and done

1.3 "Open Hardware Pathways"

First paragraph: "However, all these projects follow (or should follow) the principles stated by the open hardware definition", I'd link "open hardware definition" to https://www.oshwa.org/definition/ Change "paperweights" to "biomaterials" 2nd paragraph of "diverging pathways", "techniques that are closer to professional product design" Link responsible innovation to https://spectrum.ieee.org/what-does-responsible-innovation-mean

  • agree and done

Responsible innovation section needs a closing paragraph

  • How about: "Keep these principles in mind when you shape your project, now and in the future."?

1.4 "Open Hardware Canvas"

Subtitle: I'd change for "A tool to help you manage your open hardware projects" I'd link to the Mozilla Open Canvas and the Lean Canvas.

  • agree and done I'd remove the cheeky comment in brackets xD
  • I removed the comment and added the community canvas Make the github link clickable
  • agree and I did that.

Well, pending example, we can ask open flexure to complete the canvas, or one of Emilio's projects? I thought this was already done...

  • I agree. Let's ask open flexure?

Any more resources? For 1.1

For 1.3

Maybe we can add good examples of commercial, educational, activist, scientific, artistic open hardware?

  • I agree, let's collect some.

For 1.4

Maybe read more about the original business canvas? But not too relevant... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business_Model_Canvas

  • I added that

Are the assignments appropriate For 1.1

Yes, I think is good to start with a light exercise as an introduction I agree to that

For 1.2

Yes, but the list of projects from the consultation is missing

For 1.3

Yes, still simple but thought-provoking questions

  • I agree. I think everything else would be too much

For 1.4

Yes, make the link clickable

  • I think I already did that.
vektorious commented 2 years ago

NOTE: All changes were done in pull request #39

Typos

For 1.1

  • Sentence: "When you share your process and making ongoing work openly available on the web" --> replace making for make
  • Sentence: "Your project can have positive, transformative effects far beyond what you’re able to imagine" --> replace effects for effect
  • Sentence: "But you should be prepared for the reality that it takes time and energy build a functional community of people who work well together." -->
  • replace build for to build
  • Fixed, didn't find more

For 1.3

  • 3rd paragraph of "diverging pathways": "and works together with scientists to develop a new artefacts adapted to their needs." --> replace with "and works together with scientists to develop new tools adapted to their needs."
thessaly commented 2 years ago

1.1 "Working open"

Do you mean this post? We can add it, but it does not really heave much information about the review process https://openhardware.space/stories/hello_world

I think we need a proper blogpost on the review process, can do that and link it later on

1.2 "The Open Hardware Landscape"

I'd add riscV to that 2nd paragraph in "communities & platforms".

well, doesn't hurt. But can you do it @thessaly

Sure, will add it.

Responsible innovation section needs a closing paragraph

How about: "Keep these principles in mind when you shape your project, now and in the future."?

Sounds good, will add it.

1.4 "Open Hardware Canvas"

Well, pending example, we can ask open flexure to complete the canvas, or one of Emilio's projects? I thought this was already done...

I agree. Let's ask open flexure?

Yes, or @amchagas do you feel like completing the canvas for any of your projects?

For 1.2, resources:

How about "Open Hardware at CERN"? http://cds.cern.ch/record/2109248/files/CERN-Brochure-2015-002-Eng.pdf

Will add that.

For 1.3, resources:

Maybe we can add good examples of commercial, educational, activist, scientific, artistic open hardware?

I agree, let's collect some.

This is pending then.

amchagas commented 2 years ago

If Open Flexure peeps can do the Canvas, that would be great, given how well documented and how exemplary their project is!