Closed wolftune closed 8 years ago
Looks good to me but since it is ever so slightly more substantial than a speling correction will leve to @hlainchb to merge or not.
2.1 is complete and won't be changed. Please re-submit proposed change to /od/dev/index.markdown (there isn't a plan for a new version at this point but it makes sense to have someplace to accumulate possible changes).
the "and" and the comma in 1.2 were grammatically incorrect combinations. The second and (now the only one given my edit) was not followed by something that works as a complete sentence, and the different qualifiers make it not a consistent list that deserves comma separation. Although my result is a long sentence, I'm making this fix just to be okay for now. I would prefer to rewrite the sentence with the "should" part first and an "at least" added to the "must" part, but we've started voting on moving forward with 2.1 already.
I hope we can at least accept my grammatical fix.