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[Bootcamp Week 1] 🥴 "Impostor Syndrome", ☯️ Experience Report, 📚 Reading, 📊 Visualization #253

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mosesnjuguna commented 1 year ago

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Ten Principles for Writing clearly
1. Distinguish real grammatical rules from folklore.
2. Use subjects to name the characters in your story.
3. Use verbs to name their important actions.
4. Open your sentences with familiar units of information.
5. Get to the main verb quickly:
• Avoid long introductory phrases and clauses. • Avoid long abstract subjects.
• Avoid interrupting the subject-verb connection.
6. Push new, complex units of information to the end of the sentence.
7. Begin sentences that form a unit with consistent subjects/topics.
8. Be concise:
• Cut meaningless and repeated words and obvious implications.
• Put the meaning of phrases into one or two words.
• Prefer affirmative sentences to negative ones.
9. Control sprawl:
• Don’t tack more than one subordinate clause onto another.
• Extend a sentence with resumptive, summative, and free modifiers.
• Extend a sentence with coordinate structures after verbs.
10. Above all, write to others as you would have others write to you.

These are drawn from Style, Lessons in Clarity and Grace (https://www.pearson.com/en-us/subject-catalog/p/style-lessons-in-clarity-and-grace/P200000002140/9780137536603).

mosesnjuguna commented 1 year ago

Chat gpt edit didn't relay the emotional relief expressed in my unedited experience report.