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A distressingly arkward sentence is the most visible language in the program #21

Open GoogleCodeExporter opened 8 years ago

GoogleCodeExporter commented 8 years ago 
Open the NoSleep preferences.

You are greeted by a problematic piece of English that doesn't *quite* parse 
grammatically. I'd suggest something to the effect of 'NoSleep allows you to 
prevent your computer from going to sleep when its lid is closed.' as a 
replacement, but the issue could probably do with some more thought. You could 
just get rid of it altogether.

Version 1.3.0

I'd suggest more rigorous language checking, or a proofreader or something, but 
this sentence appears to be the only remotely lengthy piece of language in the 
whole program, so it's not likely to continue to be an issue.

Original issue reported on code.google.com by n...@musicfortheblind.co.uk on 29 Feb 2012 at 1:38

GoogleCodeExporter commented 8 years ago

Original comment by integral...@gmail.com on 23 Apr 2012 at 10:32