some thoughts

[susannalles]

• Why are you using <TEI.2>
• If you want to add Joyce's corrections and errors don't forget to ad an xml:id to Joyce, James.
• I would do a basic difference between the typographical layer and the semantic one. Thus, I would avoid the use of tags like <emph>: is that because is a foreign language <foreign>, a <title>, etc. I would leave the typo for the final
• Maybe here you would have to creat a @class for this kind of line: <l><emph rend="italic">Pull out his eyes,</emph></l> Why is in cursive?
• Not sure this is a line: <l> * * * </l>
• This is not either a line: <l>II</l>
• Once the paragraphs are settled, you could give an @xml:id

[JonathanReeve]

These are great comments, @susannalles! Thanks. Since these look like separate issues, I'll open issues for each one.